单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Tom has many rules. He must go to school at 6:15, so He has to get up at 6:00 every morning. He can’t eat outside. He can’t listen to music on school days and he can’t watch TV on school nights. He must be back home by 12: 00 in the morning and by 9: 20 in the evening.