单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Tom has many rules. He must go to school at 6:15, so He has to get up at 6:00 every morning. He can’t eat outside. He shouldn't listen to music on school days and watch TV on school nights. He must go home by 12: 00 in the morning and by 9: 20 in the evening.