小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she's name is lily,she is not only beautiful but also helpful,she is volunteer,she always attends to the volunteer activities when she is free.now she is thirty-one years old,she was marriaged two years ago and now she has a baby who is one years.nowdays people getting more and more busy,we don't have too much time to meet,but it won't influence our relationship,we always keep in touch by phone,qq