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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:establish business relationship Dear Sir,I'm hubin from XX company,i knew your brand-new product of item 5670 from the exhibtion which was held in NewYork on 15Dec to 22Dec,I'm very interested in this item,would you please send me the price list and instruction.we are very grateful to you for your cooperation and we are looking forward to establish business relationship with you.
