英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

How to be an independent female? This question has been bothering me for a long time. First of all,I think the most important is that we should have own thoughts and ideas,don't be influenced easily by other people's thinking,of course some good suggestions we can take them as a reference. Then,in today's society,women need to have a job that they like and a regular resource of income.at the same time we should work hard,because if you want to double your income you need to double your effort.i think economic independence is the premise of the thought independence. The last but not least,women should train many their own hobbies in the spare time and also should have the circle of friends,so that they don't have too much time to surround men In short, with the increasing of the percentage of divorce,Although the happiest women, they still have the possibility of facing life alone,so happy life need to be created by ourselves don't rely on other people.