作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Pen pal wanted Hello, my name is Lucy King.My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.Because I am from the UK.I am a 13-year-old girl. I can speak English well.I like playing sports,listening to music and watching movies. But I love China very much!I want to know China a lot.So I want a Chinaese girl to help me with my Chinaese,and I want us to have the same habbies.