单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Pen pal wanted Hello, my name is Lucy King.My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I come from London,England.And I am a 13-year-old girl. I can speak English well.I like playing sports,listening to music and watching movies. But I love China very much!I want to know China a lot.So I want a China girl to help me with my Chinaese,and I want us to have the same hobbies.