采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;运用了丰富的复杂句;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;请注意分段。
Dear All, I'm pleased to inform all the sales team that HR is going to organize a training about the sales skills and operation. Date: 12Aug,2013 Time: 9:00am to 11:00am Room: No. meeting room The content is related to the basic qualities of the sales people,I.e how to be a qualified sales person,how to establish the contacting with the customers,how to negotiate the discount with the customers The trainer is Amy who graduated from Cambridge University,He has a lot of experience in training and sales work.Also he was invited to Alibaba to speech by Ma Yun,so we do believe this training will be very helpful for us to improve the real skills At last,please make sure to attend it on time,thank you