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Pen pal wanted Hello, my name is Lucy King.My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I come from London,England.I am a 13-year-old girl and birthday is on Dragon Boat Festival.my I can speak English well.I like playing sports,listening to music and watching movies. But I love China very much!I want to know China a lot.So I want a China girl to help me with my Chinaese,and I want us to have the same hobbies.