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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Pen pal wanted Hello, my name is Lucy King.My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I come from London,England.I am a 13-year-old girl and birthday is on Dragon Boat Festival. I can speak English well.I like playing sports,listening to music and watching movies. But I love China very much！I want to know China a lot.So I want a China girl to help me with my Chinaese,and I want us to have the same hobbies. Please write and tell me about yourself. In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese. In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language. it is hard for people to see eye to eye. English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China. Only by characters Chinese literature can send off its brilliance. Learning a country's culture, especial its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language. Because of we are Chinese, why do we give up our mother tongue and learn our owne culture through a foreign language?
