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One possible version: Pen pal wanted Hello, my name is Lucy King. I’m from the UK and I can speak English. I want a pan pal in China. I think China is a beautiful country. I’m 13 years old and my birthday is in December. I havelittle a dog named Coco. I like playing sports and listening to the music. On , I often go to the movies with my parents. Please write and tell me about yourself.