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hello,my name is Lucy King.my last name is king my first name is lucy I‘m 13 years oid I’m from UK my language is english my fauourite is footboll I like music and movies.I‘m hope of china girl。I don’t like dog and pig. but I like Sun smart,Sunshine handsome,Cool sun boy I'm is happy girl