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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(39):过度依赖电脑的弊端

发布时间:2013-11-18 17:34浏览次数:10558
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Perhaps the biggest difference is in the growth of computers. Computers can think, remember and calculate faster than any human brain. A computer can hold more than a billion facts in its memory. There are computers that are so big that they would fill this entire auditorium with machinery. Business and banks are now managed by computers. Students’ grades, their marks are all managed by the computer, not from your teachers. In America we pay bills. We have to pay our children’s university study from a computer and I pay the computer who then writes me another letter to say, “Thank you for your payment. You now own such-and-such amount.” This is not even seen by a human being. It is all between me and the computer. However, if a computer makes a mistake, that won’t help you. If a computer makes a mistake about one of you, it is terribly difficult to correct that mistake. And sometimes a computer does make a mistake; that mistake is never learned by another computer and the same mistake will go into other computers. And it becomes terribly difficult for one person to correct a mistake that has been made. So in many ways people have become the servant of computers who are bigger and cleverer than they are. Of course, computers speed up every operation because computers can immediately record, remember facts and produce new information that is combined with these facts. It makes science possible. Modern science would not be possible without the computers to do the calculations.
 
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你可以用实例或其他方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子.
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,

并包括如下要点:

沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;
骇客入侵对国家带来的危害;
上网需要大笔的费用。
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Computers, which can calculate faster and remember more, have taken place of human beings in many aspects. However, the total reliance on computers will make it difficult to discover the mistakes made by a computer, thus resulting in horrible consequences. The price we pay for relying on computers maybe already too high. The ever increasing numbers of students addicted to computer games and online relay chats is alarming. These students however, might not do well in their study. The attacks of hackers are also a threat to the security of the information of a country. Hackers’ attacks will also bring about money loss. What's more, surfing the internet is expensive and time-consuming, and thus internet users will have the feeling that they have wasted a lot of time and learnt nothing after surfing the internet. To be brief, we should not underestimate the negative influence of computers. Needless to say, one ought to take advantage of the computer properly.

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