2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Computers, which can calculate faster and remember more, have taken place of human beings in many aspects. However, the total reliance on computers will make it difficult to discover the mistakes made by a computer, thus resulting in horrible consequences. The price we pay for relying on computers maybe already too high. The ever increasing numbers of students addicted to computer games and online relay chats is alarming. These students however, might not do well in their study. The attacks of hackers are also a threat to the security of the information of a country. Hackers’ attacks will also bring about money loss. What's more, surfing the internet is expensive and time-consuming, and thus internet users will have the feeling that they have wasted a lot of time and learnt nothing after surfing the internet. To be brief, we should not underestimate the negative influence of computers. Needless to say, one ought to take advantage of the computer properly.