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The city of Hangzhou has set up special zebra crossing in order to prevent traffic accidents. However, drunk driving accidents where a girl was crushed to death despite the setup of the new zebra lines. Drunk driving, as it has come to be known, is a relatively bad behaviour. The drunken driver, who has lost the grip of reality, tends to result in tragedies. The story of my aunt dramatically illustrates the point. My aunt, who was drunk one night, drove her car and accidentally crashed into a tree. Though my aunt was not seriously hurt, the car was damaged and out of repair. How my aunt regretted not having drunk so much! From my perspective, those drunk driver, if discovered, should be punished. To begin with, they have already been against the law, and thus they deserve the punishment. What's more, they must have been aware of the incorrect behaviour, which means they do so deliberately. Last but not least, if not punished strictly, many will continue to conduct this kind of crime, bring about more tragedies. Never should we drive unless we are a reasonable sober.
