作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中从句的使用的有点少了;全文结构较为严谨。
Dear All, I am pleased to inform all the sales team that HR is going to organize a training about sales skills and operation. The content is related to the basic qualities of sales people, how to establish the contacting with customers, how to negotiate with customers for getting further orders. The trainer is XXX, who graduated from Cambridge University, and now worked for xxx. He has a lot of experience in training and sales working experience, also he was invited to Alibaba to lecture by Ma yun. So we do believe that this traning will be very helpful for us to improve the real sales skills At last, welcome all the sales staffs to attend this training in time. Best regards, HR Dept