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With the development and popularity of internet,more and more people like online shopping.everybody in the world knows that the most easy way to buy things is to buy on the net,you can seat at home to buy everything what you want by computer,it's very convenient and it can save us a lot of time,even more it's cheap. Even though it's very beneficial to our life,there are still something bad about the online shopping,we can't see the actual things when we are buying it.so sometimes we bought the things they are not exactly what we want.more than there are many illegal businesses sell fakes because we bought them only through picture,so we are unable to inspect the quality. So i do suggest that we should go to the securit and reliable website to buy things,meanwhile the related government department should pay more attention to the quality of online store
