作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
The current educational system focusing on examinations has widened the generation gap between students and teachers. The good old days when student and teachers talked like friends have become a golden memory. The alarming phenomenon has set me thinking. From my perspective, I am not willing to tell my teachers my thought. Anyway, teachers, the majority of whom tend to have relatively conservative thoughts, might not fully understand students' opinion, and thus some misunderstandings will be caused. Furthermore, teachers who focus more on examinations than anything else nowadays might not be interested of students' emotional states. In my opinion, teachers ought to be friends with students. Such undertakings, however, might not be a task for a Sunday afternoon rambler. Teachers should admit their faults and weaknesses. Students, simultaneously, might as well abandon their bias, which is beneficial to form a good relationship between students and teachers. Students and teachers should get along with each other. After all, they are not enemies.