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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
With the development and popularity of the internet,more and more people like online shopping.Everybody in the world knows that the most easy way to buy things is to buy on the net,you can seat at home to buy everything what you want by computer,it's very convenient and it can save us a lot of your time,even more it's cheap. Even though it's very beneficial to our daily life,there are still something bad about the online shopping,for example,we can't see the real things when we are buying it.So sometimes we bought the things they are not exactly what we want.Even it creates a lot of chances for illegal businesses to sell fakes because we bought them only through pictures,so we don't have chance to inspect the quality of the goods. So i do suggest that we should go to the securit and reliable website to buy things,meanwhile the related government department should pay more attention to the quality of the online store
