2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer, is the most miraculous machine in contemporary society. The ever increasing quantities of information lead to the invention of computer. With the microchip, the computer can incredibly calculate and analyse at a much higher speed than any human being. The convenience of computer and related application is undeniable. The amazing machine, offers people a great variety of civilized comforts. They can write passages using microsoft word, play games, enjoy videos and surf the internet. Even when such refinements are not available, people can still use it for some difficult calculation and data storage. However, there is another insidious kinds of problem that affects people modern days and invade their daily life. To begin with, staring at the computer for a long time, which is often the case, lead to short-sightedness. What's more, the reliance on computer make people no longer hard working. Last but not least, large amount of false information influx with the appearance of the Internet, which brings about unpredictable consequences. Men should not underestimate the influcence of computers. One should keep in mind that computers should be made the most of.