七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Hi,I'm Sam.I'm got up at six o'clock befor today.And I'm rode a bike to park.I'm so happy to went the park.For lunch,I ate KFC with my parents.Afternoon,I played baekeball with my classmates.From four o'clock to six o'clock,After dinner,I'm went for a waik with my father.He bought musik CD for me.