初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

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My favourite the movie. My favourite the moive is WUJI.It was very popular when WUJI came.I went to the movin in the first that to saw. Zhangbozi is the first actress and Xietingfeng is the first actor.I like Zhangbozi because she is very beautiful.I hope that I can become a actor similar with Xietingfeng