七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam get up in 6 clovk morning yestday , then he gone to the park by hide bike , he was very happy in the park , his perents and he have lunch in the McDonald. sam and his classmates played basktball in the school from 4:00 to 6:00 in the afternoon , after supper, his father an he are go for a walk . his father bought a music cd . what a interesting day is it to sam