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With the development and popularity of the internet,more and more people like online shopping,Everybody in the world knows that the most convenient way to buy things is to buy online.you can seat at home to buy everything what you want by computer,it's very convenient and it can save us a lot of time,even more the price of the goods online is much cheaper than those of physical stores Although it's very benefical for our daily life,there are still something bad about online shopping,for example,we can't see the real things when we are buying it,so sometimes we bought the things they are not exactly what we want,even it can creat a lot of chances for illegal businesses to sell fakes because we buy the goods only through seeing pictures,so we don't have chance to insepct the quality of the goods. So I do suggest that we should go to the security and reliable website to buy things,meanwhile the relevant government departments have to pay more attention to the quality of the online store
