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熟练使用了一些长难句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。
With the development and popularity of the internet,more and more people like online shipping.Everybody in the world knows that the most easy ways to buy things is to buy online. You can seat at home to buy everything what you want by computer,It's very convenient and it can save us a lot of time.even more it's cheap. Although it's very beneficial to our daily life,there are still somthing bad about online shopping,for example you can't see the real things when you are buying it.so somtimes you bought the things they are not exactly what you want.Even it can creat a lot of chances for illegal businesses to sell fakes,because we buy the goods only through seeing the pictures,so we don't have chance to inspect the quality of the goods. So I do suggest that we should go to the security and reliable website to buy things,Meanwhile the relevent government departments should pay more attention to the quality of online store
