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文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.. Then he goes to the park by bike. He's having a good time in the park.. At noon and parents at McDonald (s) to eat lunch. Sam and his classmates play basketball at school, and from four pm to (till) six pm. After dinner, Sam and go a walk CD (for), the father bought him a classical music. How interesting the day Sam was!
