但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
A funny day! Yesterday morning,Sam got up at 6 o'clock. Then he rode a bike to the park.He had a good time in the park.He flew a kite and drew a picture.At noon,he ate lunch in McDonald's with his parents.In the afternoon,Sam played basketball with his friends at the school from 4 am till 6 am.After supper,Sam went for a walk with his father.His father bought a classic CD for him.What a funny day it was!