2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；全文结构较为严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Good morning,the cargo have already arrived at the warehouse,but nobody deal with it,could you please help to contact the person who is charge of it,thank you! Good morning,the cargo have already arrived the warehouse,but nobody deal with it,could you please help to contact the person who is charge of it,thank you!