七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；多多注意句法错误，若加强从句的练习，文章会更棒；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

yesterday sam went to bed was six o'clock then he ride bike went to the park he was very happy at noon he with his momand dad at mcdonalds had lunch afternoon sam with his student played basketball at school from four o'clock to six o'clock after supper sam with his father went for a walk his father buoght a cd for sam this day sam was very happy