句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;衔接词较为不错,但文章结构不严谨;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
sam got up at six yestarday.then he rode a bike went to park.he had a good time at the park.he with his parents on McDonald’s had lunch.afternoon,samwith his classmates played basketball,flom four to six. after dinner,sam with his father went for a walk,his father bought a music CD for him. sam had a good time!