能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;衔接词较为不错,但文章结构不严谨;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
sam got up at six yestarday.then he rode a bike went to park.he had a good time at the park.he with his parents on McDonald’s had lunch.afternoon,samwith his classmates played basketball,from four to six. after dinner,sam with his father went for a walk,his father bought a music CD for him. him have a good time!