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作者词汇基础不错，还请增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
I have many friends from childhood till now, but the best of them is a girls named Lee. We met with each other at the college activities. She was a host and I was an artist.Her red dress made her stand out, she looks very beautiful,she has long black hair,two big black eyes. She is not tall,but she is both intelligent and kind.She often helps us, and everyone likes her very much. Her voice is nice, she is good at singing and writing, I fell in love with her at that time. Once a day, we need work together for writing on the blackboard, because we all have good writing skills. At that time,we talked a lot with each other,such as our hobby, diet,daily life, works and many another things, and that's our first date. She likes reading books, travel to many place, play computer games, swim and so on.We all take interest in travel. After that, we had a trip to the mountain Nan,and spent a day in the open air. It is a wonderful memory in my mind. I have never forgot that feeling. And then, we always stay together to have lunch, to go shopping, to see some films, and something like that. We keep nothing back from each other. We always like body and shadows.We are used to being together everywhere. After graduate,She became a secretory in a hotel,and she is qualified to be a secretory. We always keep in touch with each other. Yes, we may meet many new friends in the future. But we will never forget that period. And I will cherish it, I do think she will do that either. It reminds me of the quota from Gums:"Life is just like a box of chocolate, you never know what's in it." .Well, good luck for you, my best friend.
