采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中从句的数量太少;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
My school My school is named San Xing and it is situated in the middle of Lai wu city,it not only be surround of beautiful lack,but also be full of learning atmosphere.What's more,it has fresh air and blue sky. Besides,our school's teachers often make the daily exam for strengthen our study's ability .In the weekday,we can sit in the grass reading English essay in order to enrich our friendship. Only in the school can I enjoy the happy every day.I like my school