2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A beautiful city in China I believe the beautiful place that my hometown named Qing Dao will makes you happy.It may be briefly summed up as follows. To start with,there have many interesting things,such as beautiful coast and blue sky,most importantly,the fresh air if you breathe in that it can bring the feeling of relaxing.Besides,the local food is very delicious and I can give a dinner for you.I think we are standing in the beach and the wind swaying our face randomly that it is very wonderful. To summed up,welcome to my hometown.