2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

A beautiful city in China I believe the beautiful place that my hometown situated in Qing Dao that will makes you happy.It may be briefly summed up as follows. To start with,there have many interesting things,such as beautiful coast and blue sky,what are more,the fresh air if you breathe in that it can bring the feeling of thrilling.As far as I'm concerned,the local food is exceedingly delicious and I can give a dinner for you.I think we are standing in the beach and the wind swaying our face randomly that it is very wonderful.Additionally,we can swim in the sea that it can not only make us relax and unwind but also we can strengthen our health. To summed up,I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Qing Dao.