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A beautiful city in China I believe the beautiful place named Li Jing will makes you happy.It may be briefly summed up as follows. To start with,there have many interesting things,such as beautiful coast and blue sky,most importantly,the fresh air if you breathe in that it can bring the feeling of relaxing.As far as I'm concerned,the local food is very delicious and I can give a dinner for you.I think we are standing in the beach and the wind swaying our face randomly that it is very wonderful.Besides,we can swim in the sea that it can not only make us relax and unwind but also we can strengthen our health. To summed up,I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Li Jing.
