小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮。

There are a old saying,The mountains and waters in Guilin are the finest under heaven.Now I have a trip just right to see the beautiful scenery,it can be briefly summed up as follows. To beginning with,,when my foot stepped into there,the magnificent mountains have being surprised my heart,I have to marvel at the magical scene.What's more,the waters are also great that it not only can drink randomly but also which are clear.As far as my concerned,the Guilin is exceedingly wonderful,and I love my trip.