单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Sam got up at six yesterday. Then he ride his bike to the park, he was interesting in the park. He has the lunch in the McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon Sam and his classmates played the basketball at school from four o' clock to six o' clock. What a interesting day Sam has!