2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法基础较为扎实。

It is no exaggeration that everything has two sides and the cell phone is not an exception,it also has advantage and disadvantage.For one thing,with the using of the mobile phone increasingly that it has caused many unfavorable things such as people were crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.As far as I'm concerned,the trouble of causing it briefly is people is more and more uncivilized so that they almost ignore the traffic rule.What's more,the mobile phone has got an essential part for most of people so people make a habit that looking at the phone all the time.