七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句使用不熟练；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday. Then he went to park by bick,he palyed happy in there.He and his parent's have lunch in McDonald's.Sam and his friend played basketball in this afernoon,begin in 4 o'clock to 6 o'clock.After dinner,Sam and his fater go for a walk.His fater given he a music CD.How beautiful and fun day is Sam have.