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A funny day Hi! I'm Sam.I'd like to tell you about what an exciting day I had yesterday! Next week is my birthday,and my parents promised that I can do everything I want to do yesterday.So I got up early yesterday,at 6 o'clock.I opened the window,and found than the air was very fresh.I took a deep breath and I decided to go to the park to take a break.I went there by bike.For a week of learning hardly,I enjoyed the beautiful scenery and it relaxed me a lot.When the noon came, I ate McDonald's with my parents.It was so delicious! In the afternoon,I went to school and met some of my friends.For the sunny day,we decided to play basketball,and I took my basketball from my locker.We played for a very long time----for two hours----16:00 to 18:00!We also had matches.For the hard work we did before,we finally won the match.I was so excited!At about 18:05,my father went to school and told me that I should go home.I said goodbye to my friends,and they all said"Happy birthday"to me.When we arrived home,my mother had finished doing our dinner.The food my mother made is always delicious!After had the great dinner,I went for a walk with my father.He brought me a classical music CD for my birthday next week!I was so happy about that!I like classical music a lot! When we got home,I played the CD and all of us enjoyed it a lot.It is so beautiful! How funny the day was,isn't it!I wish all of my weekend could like this!
