七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句数量过少；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，另外请重视拼写检查；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

sam got up at six o'ciock yestday. Then ,he rode his bike to the park,he played of very happy in the park.At noon,he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents.In the afternoon,sam Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. After dinner,sam went for a walk with his father,his father bought a CD for him..What a fun day Sam had!What about you?