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单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday. After that,he rode his bike to the park,and he played of very happy in the park.At noon,he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents.In the afternoon,sam Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. After dinner,sam went for a walk with his father,and his father bought a CD for him..What a fun day Sam had!What about you?
