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My Busy Day I had a busy day yesterday.Until now,I still feel very tired and all the things I had done yesterday are still in my mind.Would you like to know about what I did yesterday?Let me tell you now! It was sunny yesterday.The sky was blue,and the birds sang beautifully.First,I got up early and went for a walk at a park near my house.Then I bought some vegetables for lunch and fruit for afternoon tea.As soon as I got home,I did some housework.I not only swept the floor but also cleaned my bedroom.After that,I began to do my homework until 11:00.Then I cooked lunch by myself.It's my first time to cook lunch by myself and I was a little nervous at first,but soon I wasn't so that nervous.I ate the food I did by myself and it was delicious! In the afternoon,I finished all my homework and went to school.I met some of my friends and we played happily together.I went home at 5:00,and cooked dinner.My parents went home and they were surprised to see the delicacies on the desk.They ate happily and I was very happy to see that. After dinner,my parents and I took a walk.We enjoyed the time we had together. We got home at 7:00 and watched TV.We played some games for fun.Finally I went to bed at 10:00.I was too tired and I soon fell asleep. That's the busy day I had yesterday.It's really busy,isn't it?
