七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.Then he went to the park where he had a good time by bike. With parents together, sam had lunch at the McDonald's. After that, Sam played basketball with his classmates from 4:00 pm till 6:00 pm. After supper, Sam went for a walk with his father, and his father bought him a CD of classic music. What a funny day!