正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
(An Interesting Day) It was a sunny Monday. I went out to play with my friend --- Jane. I like to play with her, because she is a strong girl. We rode bikes to a garden. This was a big and beautiful garden. In the garden, these were some roses and some lilies. Children like to play in this garden. We did a lot of things there. Sometimes we sat on the grass side by side, closing the eyes and quietly and hearing the bird sing songs. Soon we rode the bikes quickly. Suddenly Jane stopped. “What’s the matter?” I asked her,” My bike is broken” she said, “Oh, it’s too bad!” I said, “Don’t worry.” She said. She folded her bike, and put it on my bike, “ Let’s go to mend my bike!” We went to a shop to mend it. Then her bike was Ok. We became very happy again. This is an interesting day. We had a good time together!