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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17691
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
用户的作文(系统评分47.5分
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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

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(An Interesting Day) It was a sunny Monday. I went out to play with my friend --- Jane. I like to play with her, because she is a strong girl. We rode bikes to a garden. This was a big and beautiful garden. In the garden, these were some roses and some lilies. Children like to play in this garden. We did a lot of things there. Sometimes we sat on the grass side by side, closing the eyes and quietly and hearing the bird sing songs. Soon we rode the bikes quickly. Suddenly Jane stopped. “What’s the matter?” I asked her,” My bike is broken” she said, “Oh, it’s too bad!” I said, “Don’t worry.” She said. She folded her bike, and put it on my bike, “ Let’s go to mend my bike!” We went to a shop to mend it. Then her bike was Ok. We became very happy again. This is an interesting day. We had a good time together!

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