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Lin Zexu was outstanding modern Chinese politicians, the great Chinese nation hero, pioneer of the world anti-drug, "The first man who sees the world in ancient China". "I’ll sacrifice myself if it’s good to the nation, and I’ll never escape from troubles" is his wisdom, this wisdom always encourage us. Fuzhou Lin Zexu memorial to build in 1961, opened in 1982. Including the provincial cultural relics protection units "Wen Zhong Lin Temple" and "Lin history achievement exhibition" two parts, cover an area of 8500 square meters, is the Lin Zexu cultural relics collection center, Lin Zexu spirit show center, Lin Zexu data research center, is the largest Lin Zexuzhuan Memorial Hall. Wen Zhong Lin Temple, built in 1905, Lin Zexu's descendants and notables in memory of Lin Zexu, after obtaining the consent of the court in the construction of the special hall. Wen Zhong Lin Temple include: arched door, the door, Royal Beiting, Shu Detang, Huating, cloud left court and gardens, is a style of Fuzhou in the late Qing Dynasty classical garden style temple architecture. "Lin history achievement exhibition" include: committed to serve the country of Fujian Province are naked, honest and pragmatic sajik Mingchen; the present-day world great man left the sea; all the world to admire the narcotics pioneer; aggression against the enemy to the national heroes.