能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;文中有较多拼写错误,用词太过单一。
sam got up at six o'clock tyesterday. he ride a bike went to park. he had a good time at park ,he had lunch at the mcdonald's with parents ,at the aftenoon,sam piayed basketball at shool with him friend .at aftenoon four o'clock till at aftenoon six o'clock sam together got fora walk with fatch ,fatch give he bought a classicia musician cd ,this day samvery happy .