文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;使用了个别复杂句,但文中错误句子较多。
My Busy Day today is sunday,i get up at 6:30,then,i quikly have breakfast.it is delicious. at 7:00,i go to english teacher' home sdudy english by bike. after school i paly basketball with my clssmats it is so interesting.i like play basketball. in the afternoon . i with my brother and my sister go to the zoo .i see some tigers ,birds and pandas .they are smart and cut . i like they . in the evening . i watch tv and play computer . oh! this day is busy.