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Sam woke up at six o'clock yesterday morning. He wanted to relax himself during this summer holiday.He doesn't like to go on a journey, so he went to a park by bike. After he reached there, he enjoyed himself playing in the park. At noon,his parents and he ate a healthy lunch in the McDonald’s, the foods there were so delicious.After that, at four in the afternoon, Sam with his classmates played basketball at the school till six pm, during the basketball match, Sam felt a little tired but very happy. He went back home to eat a good supper, after eating supper, Sam and his father took a walk to a CD's store together and bought him a CD which has classical instrumental music. Sam was glad because he enjoys classical music very much. What an interesting day Sam had!
