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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec. 26th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hobnail,tom Subject: To establish business relationships Dear Sir or Madam, I knew your new product of No. 5670 during the exhibition was held in New York on the date of Dec. 15th to 22rid and I was quitely interested in it. Please send us the price list and an instruction. Thank you for your attention to and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Hu Bin
